by Cindy May 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Grief |
Perfect! Its exactly what loss feels like.. |
I love this idea...i gave a whirl, excellent technique..i love it, awesome writing, keep it up |
by ben thompson
Great work on this poem form. You faced this challenge well. The grief can be felt. |
Well done, good work. Will read more of your soon =) |
by Gasttlee
Very smooth and moving! 5/5 |