Grief ( Etheree)

by Cindy   May 15, 2007


Grief
Alone
With my thoughts
Missing your touch
Heartache surrounds me
Darkness filling my soul
Pain deeper than any known
Life not worth living anymore
Lost without being in your embrace
Existing with no meaning, endless tears

Written By: Cynthia Graver May 14, 2007

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

* For a challenge *

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  • 18 years ago

    by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`

    Perfect! Its exactly what loss feels like..

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    I love this idea...i gave a whirl, excellent technique..i love it, awesome writing, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Great work on this poem form. You faced this challenge well. The grief can be felt.
    All the best.
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Well done, good work. Will read more of your soon =)

    Warmet regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Very smooth and moving! 5/5

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