Hate, love...what am i supposed to do

by Loved In Hell   May 27, 2007


Broken tears stream down my face
pain covers the my heart like darkness covers a lighted room, why does this type of ache hurt the way it does
dreams, fallen to the floor
shatter to a million broken promises
loss of sanity sends my mind to wander in places it should not be,
cries are left unheard muffled noises of voices make me loose all senses....SHUT UP!!!!!! but it continues
LEAVE ME ALONE!!!! deathly cold hands travel up my spine icy fingers of hurt wrap around my throat pick me up and throw me in a frozen river silence fills my life death slowly creeps into my nightmares......look what you did...... you killed me...... why did you do it?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really loved this. it was so raw and bursting with powerful emotions. I felt so much paina nd anger when I read this. Very nice work. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...I really love this one also ^_^ Very intense emotion that grips the reader and makes those emotions their own ^_^ I love when a poem does that to me =) 5/5 again ^_^
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Very powerful words and statements in this piece; it doesn't flow like I would like but it is still as powerful. Great emotional write.

    With love,
    ~Richi~

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