by Jade Rossiter Jun 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Mummy sat there crying, i to young to understand, stood over my mummy and asked to hold her hand. |
by Baby Rainbow
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Excellent poem, gave me goosebumps. it was good because the subject is very touching and you made it flow steady for the reader to carry on til the end. the language use was understood as a childs point of view which adds to the emotion of the poem. |
by Jade
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AMAZING!!! |
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I hope that isnt true! god that is so sad! |
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I agree with all of them^ wow that is so sad!!!! 5/5 |
by sweetiepie18
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Excellent work, you are really gifted, keep writing and never let your talent go to waste! |