All She Had

by Loved In Hell   Jul 19, 2007


A young girl was left
Walking in the cold
She didn't have much
Only a bag to hold

People would walk past
A look of question
Some would look
With a kind affection

One of these
Was a young man
He stopped before her
And reached out a hand

She gracefully took it
So together they walked
The moment they looked
Their eyes were locked

While they were walking
From the bag she pulled something out
She gave it to him
He began to pout

"Is this all you have?"
He said, as he ripped it apart
All she had to offer
Was a little paper heart

He left her
Walking alone
But this time she was walking
With nothing to own

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow. i mean WOW. that was beautiful. i kept wondering what the bag was for and the ending was so sad. <333

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Awww what a sad yet lovely poem! It's truly touching. Even though she didn't have much, she offered it to him, but he ripped it up and tore her apart. Very emotional and well written.
    5/5
    Ciao

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    I loved the poem. I also liked the way you ended it:
    He left her
    Walking alone
    But this time she was walking
    With nothing to own

    Great one! 5/5
    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa

    Ohh.... MACHINE GUN. Great emotion at the end of the poem, it feels as if you were actually the person, which I can hardly feel in most. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Ur a great poet
    keep up the gr8 writes
    hopw to read more soon
    tk care
    bree

Read All Comments (13)

More Poems By Loved In Hell