Growing Pains (Collab with Chelsey)

by Cindy   Aug 6, 2007


Where has my baby girl gone
Sparkling eyes, mischievous grin
Long, soft, brown, bouncing curls
Just one look your heart she'd win

Seeing the way momma looks at me
Wishing I was that girl she once knew
Young and innocent, my body fully clothed
Asking God where the days went when I grew

Now sixteen, boys coming around
Talking about wanting to date
Seeing the way they leer at her
Not wanting her falling to my fate

She says things to me sometimes
That break my heart to hear
She'd rather me and him stay friends
But I picture us together for years

Hating seeing her heart break
I'm not ready to let her go
Much to young to be tied down
Needs to take things much more slow

I don't get how she doesn't understand
That it was only a few years back
When Grandma let her be free to date
I don't know why she can't be like that

The tears are falling freely now
Knowing I soon must let her fly
No more mama's baby girl
Soon she'll be telling me good-bye

If she doesn't start to be careful
Sooner or later she will push me away
I'd still like to have momma around
Rather than forget about her in my days

Listening to her threats to leave
Praying to God to help me through
Knowing as she grows into a woman
She will finally see my point of view

Written By: Chelsey and Cynthia Graver
Aug 4, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Wow, this is beautiful! I love the two authors, the way it switches back and forth, and this is something I can relate to, being my mom's only girl...This is a great poem! I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Hating seeing her heart break
    I'm not ready to let her go
    Much to young to be tied down
    Needs to take things much more slow"

    I thought these lines were beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    A very thoughtful poem, very true with today scenario.Every parents anxiety when kids enter in there teens and want freedom.Enjoyes reading it.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Beautifully done! The empathic emotion drawn out by the characters endears the poem to me. I guess I'll look forward to understanding my mother's point of view in due time. She usually pictured me as the 8-year-old Debbie she had left behind seven years ago, which then results to an occasional misunderstanding and such-to's. *shrugs* I know not her thoughts and feelings at the moment, but what I do know is that... she loves me. I'm certain of it.

    I'm truly delighted with this piece -- it's so touching! Thanks for sharing, ladies! {;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    The emotions from a mother to her child are beautiful described.
    Flow, rhyming and word choice are great.
    A pleasure to read.
    Take care