Theft of a Hellish Kind

by CODACHROME   Aug 21, 2007


You ripped my heart out
and tore my soul
Your eyes though the sparkled
shined black as coal
ur hands they ran like silk
across my many curves
never knowing wen u wuld stop
my friends said wat a perve
I closed my eyes
and tried to dream
whilst ur hands continued there journey
my soul was but a stream
running through my body
my mind began to flood
mixing with my muscles
mixing with my blood
all at once the torture ended
and ur hands left my body
in ur mind u never thought that i wuld be offended

Boy im not a rag doll
boy im not a toy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow. I dont know wether it was more dark or more sad. What else to say. Um........ It was a huge flood of emotion, I really enjoyed it though. It was incredible, It's been about five minutes since I read this and Im still in awe, Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awesome poem, god that sucks if you went through that im soo sorry.! your poem had meaning and it was as if you wrote it with anger and i think its awesome! good job! check out some of my poems please!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Great piece. Though there is some spelling errors..sometimes that adds to a persons flare. The flow was great and I liked how you ended it. It was different. The emotion was definitely felt. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i like the concept, and the ideas, very descriptive!

    keep it up!

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