Letting Go(Minute Poetry)

Amen, pain has to be let go...

You know,

As for me, whenever I try to follow a pattern or rather a type of structure, I tend to lose the point or meaning that i want to give to my poem.

But in here, you did a really good job.

You portrayed some one who finally was able to let go for he/she realize that everything was just a lied and not a reality.

Sad but its better to know the truth than to keep blinding our self and see only what we want.

What to say, here... You are the queen of formed poetry, I never read a formed poem by you and thought it was not well-written, they all express true feelings and simple thoughts, yet the form you used is complicated and so difficult, you again did a great job, here, Meena, I'm so glad you posted a new poem, keep writing.

Pain and perfection penned in only a dozen lines of packed syllables.

I always enjoy your poems. this one is very nice. I enjoy the structured formats, I found them a real challenge and a good learning tool.
Very nice Meena