Evening Fury

by Meena Krish   Mar 22, 2017



I don’t need confirmation or
spelled words to know
what I mean to you

because…

I see it in your eyes
hear it in your voice
for they are the
same tune that
plays in me,

See…

what you are doing to me
making each stroke
dance to your fury

I feel it in your sighs
in your embrace
that can’t seem to contain
the waves blooming
this evening -

when you
soaked yourself into my lips
leaving a memory…

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  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    A strong raw poem full of emotion. Great word usage and well-paced. The poem flows well and gathers strength as it carries you along, culminating in a lovely finish which for me is the strongest stanza. I must admit to being distracted by the use of “because’ between the first two stanza’s which isn’t really necessary I think, but it’s a minor criticism in an otherwise great poem.

  • 6 months ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    NICE MEENA

  • 6 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Congratulations for the win Meena :)

  • 6 months ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow Sis, just wanted to let you know that you never disappoint, simple & yet so elegant. Congrats on your win...well deserved :)

    all the best and take care...

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

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