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by Brise Oct 21, 2017
Love, romance /
I feel this pressure unfolding
with a bitter taste of dissatisfaction.
Head and heart scolding
Yet burning from his attraction
Shh...it is forbidden
To have longings like these
Still my heat is unbidden
His allure, only a tease
It is not love I feel
But a pressure within
A carnal craving only too real
An ardor staining my skin
My body prickles
From his long lasting gaze
Feverish, sweat trickles,
Eager for his appraise
I sigh, ring heavy upon my hand
For I am someone’s other
And my guilt could not withstand
My betrayal with another
So I stay content
For this ardor will be diminished
But in my torment
My curiosity will remain unfinished….I haven't written in a long time. Hopefully my wording doesn't feel so funky lol Anyways thank you for reading!
by Kitty Cat Lady
You're writing some really great poems Brise ... this one too!
"Ring heavy upon my hand" ... great description of how it feels to crave that forbidden lust. Great title again too! :-)
Thank you Kitty Cat Lady for taking your time to read my poems ! And I really appreciate your comment motivates me more :) Thank you !
There is nothing wrong in desiring something.
I loved this poem.
Thank you for your critique and your advice! and for your time ! :)
by CJ Maleney
Desire is a bugger at times especially if it's forbidden.
Thank you CJ! And it really is, wish I could've expressed it further but hey I haven't written poetry since I was a teenager :) Anyways thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your time ! :)
by Maple Tree
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