by EoB   Apr 18, 2008

Denial of the fantastic,
and impossible height,
of a past that took the shape,
of a mountain in my sight,
Now has chained me in its shadow,
so I nearly reach the light,
thus reminding me forever,
how this mountain gained its height.


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  • 8 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice write old friend, how are you you doing these days!

    Stay frosty and continue with your writing!

  • 12 years ago


    Quite profound and so well penned. The flow is impeccable and your words paint such a vivid image...just wow!
    Well done and keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Absolutely wonderful poem, very captivating and great rhyming too!! I love the imagery you have created in this piece, and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Beautiful piece! truely felt the emotion and fantastic imagery:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    I can't believe I've never read your work before,I'm sorry I missed it,This is an excellent write. Sometimes it can seem like the mountains just keep coming. Excellent rhymes and flow.A wonderful job.