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by EoB Apr 18, 2008
Dark, fantasy /
Denial of the fantastic,
and impossible height,
of a past that took the shape,
of a mountain in my sight,
Now has chained me in its shadow,
so I nearly reach the light,
thus reminding me forever,
how this mountain gained its height.
by Steven Beesley
Nice write old friend, how are you you doing these days!
Stay frosty and continue with your writing!
by HOLLY ARMER
Quite profound and so well penned. The flow is impeccable and your words paint such a vivid image...just wow!
Well done and keep it up!
by Poet on the Piano
Absolutely wonderful poem, very captivating and great rhyming too!! I love the imagery you have created in this piece, and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep writing, always and forever...
Beautiful piece! truely felt the emotion and fantastic imagery:)
I can't believe I've never read your work before,I'm sorry I missed it,This is an excellent write. Sometimes it can seem like the mountains just keep coming. Excellent rhymes and flow.A wonderful job.