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A beautiful poem, I could feel your loss and your desire to join your true love. Sometimes expressing those feelings in words is a hard thing to do. You did it eloquently. Bravo

Your poem is great. You can really feel all the sadness and emotion that you put into it.

"Dreamed of fairytale promises
Her fantasy not meant to stay
Death came knocking, cloaked in black
Carrying her true love away"

^A truly beautiful opening stanza, your words took my breath away and had me grasping each and every single line........

"Carriages crash, glass slippers break
Magic wand spells never last
Broken heart in disrepair
With memories of dances past"

^This is so heartbreaking and sad. But I love the imagery you have placed in my mind, great visuals. Your word choice here is simply amazing, and there is so much emotion and feeling portrayed here, I am left speechless.....

"Now she waits for Reaper's hand
To lead her to his side
Without her prince she can't go on
Her soul already died"

^Perfect ending, that sums everything you wrote up. You really portrayed the sadness going on here well, you should be so proud, this is a wonderful poem. Keep writing, always and forever.......

"Dreamed of fairytale promises
Her fantasy not meant to stay
Death came knocking, cloaked in black
Carrying her true love away"

^Beautiful opening stanza, really took my breath away.......Your words have created such a sadness going on here and throughout your poem and reading this part is heartbreaking, but also true......

"Carriages crash, glass slippers break
Magic wand spells never last
Broken heart in disrepair
With memories of dances past"

^My favorite stanza, filled with so much emotion and feeling.......Love your descriptions here, such vivid imagery you have painted in my mind.......Your wording is outstanding and really blew me away....

"Now she waits for Reaper's hand
To lead her to his side
Without her prince she can't go on
Her soul already died"

^Great way to end this poem up, leaving the reader filled with sadness after reading this. Excellent work, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing, always and forever!

"Dreamed of fairytale promises
Her fantasy not meant to stay
Death came knocking, cloaked in black
Carrying her true love away"

^The way you worded this, was amazing! Beautiful flow and your words are so true and sad, this was very heartbreaking.....

"Carriages crash, glass slippers break
Magic wand spells never last
Broken heart in disrepair
With memories of dances past"

^My favorite stanza, the vivid imagery you have placed here is incredible! There is so much feeling of sadness going on here, great descriptions and flow.....

"Now she waits for Reaper's hand
To lead her to his side
Without her prince she can't go on
Her soul already died"

^Wonderful ending, but so painfully sad.....
But this was a great write, filled with so much feeling, emotion, and sadness. Good work! Keep writing, always and forever!