Final Chapter

Nicely written. From my understanding, I think you're trying to illustrate the start of a new morning to the end of the day. The imaginary presented in this poem is brilliant.
Excellent Job.Keep it up;)

You have always showed depth to the sadness in which you write and this piece though sad is beautifully penned my friend.
You never failed to meet any challenge.Every stanza a favorite.
Great job.
Paul...

There are those wonderful things & colors
around us yet we cannot touch or feel it
cause fate will take it away soon...a touching
write..take care.

Cindy,
First let me say that you done a great job with the challenge. Second, I thought you really brought a depth to the sadness you write about. As though the journey you have been on has been well worth the trip, and now you are ready to retire and meet the end. Sometimes life is like that. great Job.

Take Care,
Kay

Life is like the final chapter in a book. I am always sad to reach it because I know I am at the end. But the good thing is I can move on to another book. Well done.