Please Don't GO

by Cindy   Jul 10, 2009


Please don't go away
Leaving me alone
Brokenhearted bleeding
Can't make it on my own

Living with endless pain
Too many nights I've cried
Needing to find answers
Truth from all the lies

Time still marches forward
Years have taken their toll
Happiness is rare
Gripped tight in sorrows hold

Is friendship lost so easy
Hurtful words slip untamed
Life has frowned upon me
Only myself to blame

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Written by: Cynthia Graver
June 30, 2009

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Cindy,

    I don't know what is going on, but it seems someone has left you and maybe more than one. I think one day they will be very sorry.

    It should not be this way with someone as ill as you, they should think twice to leave you alone.

    Take care girl:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Cindy dear,
    very vivid painful write.One gets moved by the flow,the honesty your poems depict.One can easily relate to your emotions and state of mind. Excellent work.
    God bless.
    Take care my friend.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    It has been a while since I commented on your poems. I liked this one. The pain in our lives is like the core of an apple that holds the seeds of our strength and if sown correctly will surely bless those around us with the wisdom those pains have brought to us. as always your poems are a joy to read.

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    Cindy, though this piece is very emotional and heartwrenching, you once again expressed your innermost feeling quite vividly.
    Each painful stanza tells the story of one who are afraid od losiing someone they held dearly.
    Your writes always brings the tears to my eyes.
    Very well penned.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such is life and people's influence that they
    make a difference & one wrong word takes
    them away...a touching write. Take care.