At The Mountain Top - A Drop of Hope

by Everlasting   Nov 28, 2013


At the mountain top, I'll wait for you,
Like morning dews in Summer's hue.
I'll be a tear. I'll be a drop,
A perpetual drip of hope -
---------- that every soul pursues anew.

So when your climb may go askew
And you find green grasses turned blue
Don't stop - just know, I'll be a drop,
---------------- At the mountain top.

And if Winter comes past you knew
Like it did before, when birds flew
To southern fields for warmer lops,
Don't stop, just know, I'll be a drop,
Unfrozen [not cold] - to unfreeze your view
---------------- At the mountain top.

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  • 6 months ago

    by Rab

    Whit braw wurds ye write here. A read it while a wiz eatin a packet o cheese and onion crisps.

  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    Judges comment 2/12/13'

    A The Mountain Top - A Drop of Hope by Everlasting (4)
    First of all, can I ask if the title should be At the Top of the Mountain?
    I've read this poem over and over and fall in love with it a little more each time. I just flows like liquid gold from start to finish and this made me wonder if it's a certain style of formed poetry? If so, I suggest adding a footnote at the bottom for the reader. I also found the layout to be very eye catching. I thought this verse to be very well presented both in structure and content. Nice job, Enjoyable read.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This will make an inspiring card for those who need inspiration. It gives a boost to then mind and encouragement for the heart..well done & well penned!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    This is really beautiful, Ms. Lucero :))) I really love this piece :)) I love the rhymes and the hopeful texture of this poem :))

  • 7 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    At the mountain top, I'll wait for you,
    Like morning dews in Summer's hue

    your this is very nice.

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