Midnight Rambles

Wonderful use of metaphor, STAR. Sorry I missed this. In fact, sorry I have been a little quieter in general. Life gets in the way sometimes...

Take care.

double post sorry.

"melts in her mouth as fast" i feel like it should be "melts in her mouth just as fast" to be a bit more clear. I like the seeming callback to your earlier poem about imperfect visible light.

"It isn't the night nor the shadows
she created, that makes her
strangle herself every night
in her own dream."

I think the comma is unneeded. I like this piece, there's an allure to it since it's vague and makes one think about what is it that disturbs her sleep.