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by Kitty Cat Lady Jul 2, 2020
Love, romance /
This dance we do is out of step
No harmony and no respect
As we invade each other's space
And steal the air that's not replaced
Treading on each other's toes
Less like lovers, more like foes
The dance is now a dull, sad beat
A farewell shuffle of defeat.
by Ben Pickard
Excellent little piece, Kitty, and a fine return to writing from you, despite the inherent sadness.
All the best as ever
by Kitty Cat Lady
All is is well thanks Ben and I'm just easing myself back in. :-) x
I could imagine this as a really short song. Meena is right - lots of feelings in such a short few lines.
I appreciate that Daniel, thanks very much :-) x
by Meena Krish
Much feelings come out in just a short write. I like the use of words and the picture you painted..well done.
Thanks so much Meena :-) x
by Milly Hayward
Great rhyming (as usual) Very topical especially for many people who are most likely at the end of their tether having had to endure lockdown for long periods with family members. Milly x
Thanks very much for your kind comments Milly :-) x
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