subtle truth

Hey star, the title 'subtle truth' could, I feel, be about anything for example when a lady asks 'does my bum look big in this' and theor partner isn't entirely honest so as not to hurt them. Unfortunately, we do this a lot as human beings, here in the UK we call it beating about the bush - what a saying haha.

you thought walls don’t move
but they do
you lean on them quietly
and they take you in
^
The image of walls taking us in as we lean on them is as far fetched as walls talking though would be good if we were lonely, like me, just to be hugged even if it's a wall.. I'm weird, I know. I do like this though.. There's a deeper meaning in there but I can't seem to r think of it..

it’s not the fantasy of
nine and three quarters,
there’s nothing on the
other side
^
I love the reference to Harry Potter here, well played!
there’s only you
and the train of denial
^
This is ending is just, wow because for the most part in life we only have ourselves to blame for the things that go wrong as we could change them and I still believe this after longstanding abusive and controlling relationship, I still blame myself for not leaving sooner but there comes a time in our lives that we say 'enough is enough' and have done with it. I like the imagery of a 'train of denial' following someone around, it would hurt but I'm guessing it will be just desserts.

Congratulations on the win,
Take care,
Em x

Ouch. I love the tone. The flow. And if I hadn’t read MaryAnnes comment, I wouldn’t have link this to Harry Potter. I am tempted to show this piece to my husband, he usually gets references pretty easily. Specially from Harry Potter. I wonder what he would say?

I like this piece.

Congratulations on the win!

Congratulations on this clever piece :)

Congrats!

Congratulations!