Beautiful...

by BleedingAngel   May 9, 2005


Beautiful sadness, you give me pain
you hurt me so much within
you made me go insane
with the obsession of being thin

Beautiful depression, you make me bleed
you are the keeper of my soul
I cut myself to fulfill your needs
to make you complete and whole

Beautiful pain, you have no heart
I feel that every time I cry
and I know that if we ever part
we would both surely die

Beautiful death, you are what I long for
please, take away my life
don't let me live like this anymore
let me cut myself with your knife

Beautiful heaven, you're waiting for me
I'll soon be coming home to you
you will set my broken soul free
and your Angel will guide me through

*I know this is not one of my best, but thank you for reading anyway*

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    This is so nice...i like it...

    And Sabrina...thanks...but you didn't tell me what's your email address...tell me okey...only then i can email to you...Luv ya...jane

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    It was a very beautiful poem despite the sadness it holds in it. I love your poems so much, there more than just words, they have meaning behind them, keep it up hun

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    OOO hunnie i loved this one! Your such an amazing writer! Keep up the great work!
    Love always,
    Haily
    xoxoxoxoox

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Beautifuly Worded I Loved The Part Where You Said "Beautiful Pain" It Was An Awesome Job An Well Worth The 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I LOVE the repetition of beautiful, however I do feel the poem in itself will be even more beautiful if you changed the style of it-
    the rhyme scheme could be something like AABC, or ABCBD... adding an extra line to a stanza. This poem could REALLY and truly blossom, all you have to do is change it from bordering ordinary- to extraordinary.
    A nice write, nontheless.

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