You Broke Me

by Richard   May 11, 2005


A fist through my chest
rips my heart out.
Decaying and bleeding the love we had, all dead
I hate to admit

I lay on my bed
crying my eyes out.
Theres a puddle of tears left,
a sad indent of my face on the
pillow of rest, its still there
comes now and then...

I know that you will leave this July
only one month to go
until all good-bye's
I'll never see you again
i know that for sure
you memory still holds
pain on me, its all true.

Why did you have to ruin it all?
Tell me to let you go,
because you were broken
and had no more.
So naive are you,
So blind that you could not see
how much i would dare
and why i would not leave.

I can't bare it again,
I know this for sure.
You'll find someone.
they might be true to you,
they might have it all,
one thing they'll never have is
the clarity for you,
the life they would not give
the tears they won't shed.

I write to you telling you how much i cared,
I tell you this in regard and possibility.
So that you might come back
and explain.

Do you remember all the laughs we had, All the things that we shared.
It was wonderful wasn't it?
I hate the fact that you have to leave, I may not take this life and go on, just remember please.

I hope you'll never forget
how much love and passion
i carried, and memories you buried
You know how you broke me?
It's OK, I'm OK
I learned to cure the disease,
Of broken love and dreams
Thanks to you,

I hope to see you again,
maybe in another life were we both
forget whats pain..

Love forever love is free so lets turn together you and me....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very deep poem! You show great detail and emotions in your work that always makes for a good read! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    I liked this one alot too. You have a very captivating and detailed way of writing. very enjoyable

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Wow, you hit home on that one, this sounds like the exact thing my ex said to me. It brought a tear to my eye. I really enjoyed this poem, but I didn't like the last line, Rhyming "free" and "me" in a poem that doesn't have a consastant rhyme scheme doesn't work out in this poem. However, you still did a really nice job on this, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Great poem! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

  • I Loved The Powerful Display Of Emotion In This Poem, Beautiful Write 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo