Hun, I like this one hun. It is true with a bit of optomism at the end tying it all together. Don't worry, your old poems really aren't bad hun I was enjoying the read. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Yeah, everyone has low times the creep up every now and then so I guess I will have to grit my teeth and hope it will be over soon. That poem is a bit strong, and I have thought better about posting it, so I think I'll thank it off, though your vote was noted. Thanks love. Nice to hear from you. Hope you are doing well.