You're the one

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Mar 27, 2006


Deep in thought
Your on my mind
Your all I can think about
Your one of a kind

I love you now
And always will
I would do anything for you
I would even kill

Your the one who
Keeps my heart beating fast
The one who I can turn to
When I look at my past

The smile on my face
Is there because of you
If I wasn't with you
I don't know what I'll do

I just want to say that
I love you with all my heart
Your everything to me
And nothing can break us apart

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  • 15 years ago

    by IL0veJarrad

    I like it.. it is very sweet

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    WOW , so lovely poem
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Another Lost Hero

    I like it. my style is pretty similar to yours. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Actually,this is one of my favorites.
    but one thing...in the 4th section it says "
    i dont know what I'll do" well i think it would sound better "I dont know what I'd do" but thats just my opinion. other than that,wonderful poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Oh dear me. This poem was not very strong in my opinion, it had a rather weak structure (missing puntuation, etc.) and the rhyming was very common and not very creative. You had plenty of emotion though, which is good. I must say, the thing that bothers me the most in writing is bad grammar. You REPEATEDLY made the mistake between "your" and "you're".

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