Last time

by ~*SugarCube*~   Mar 17, 2007


He was everything to her.
He made her feel like a queen.
They've been together since they were teens.

He never once left her side.
He was so happy forty years ago when she became his bride.

He became very ill.
He didn't have much time.
She never left his side.
She didn't want to leave.
She didn't know when his last breath would be.

They both had smiles on their faces.
Trying to make the last couple days together the best.
Even though they were both in pain.
She knew without him nothing would be the same.

She held his hand and told him she loved him with all her heart, that one day they'll be together again. giving him one last kiss.

A tear rolled down his cheek as she could see he was getting weak.
The doctors rushed in.
but they couldn't save him.

That day was the last day she ever saw him.
The last time she ever felt his lips against hers.
The last time she held the hand of the man she loved.
The last time she looked into his baby blue eyes.
The one time she had to say goodbye.

*Chelsea*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'He was so happy forty years ago when she became his bride.'
    ^ too long. the rest of the poem is shorter lines, especially the line in that stanza.

    amazing job though, i loved the poem
    you're a pretty good writer, hun.
    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    I felt the tears, but as normal they never hit my skin. This was an amazing wirte, and it just made me think of my girlfriend and how much it would kill if that was us. 10/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, truly deep
    this is your second poem that easily made me cry.
    you are a very talented poet, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    U can make poems tht can make me cry u know tht? the other one where the girl wouldn't eat almost made me cry..now im in tears...u r one of those pots tht can write really really sad ones cuz its hard to make me cry with a poem...good write!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. again i loved it. nice use of parallel structure.

    ahh, i just want to give you such a big hug. this felt so painful. loosing someone so important would drive me insane...no beyond it...

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