Transient {haiku}

This is just so creamy!!!!!! The flow the word usage and the mingling of languages. Great execution. You have an amazing talent.

First confussion then amazment... if i got the right definitions that this is a piece of apology if I'm not correct please pm me and tell me what these words mean... still i like it your last line i had to google... 5/5

Excellect Haiku! :) this was really amazing.. your word choice is amazing.. To be honest this is one of the best Haiku I have ever read.

Keep up the good work.
Uhm I have to ask something in PM :)

Very good
i love hiaku it is difficult but always lovely when your done
5/5
oh about the french: i'd put a subtitle type thing beneath it

I think of trees on this one.
I have no idea what you just said, though.
Lol.
But I also see lovers.
Talking in french.
My conscious starts to fray...
Lovers falling in love
falling asleep as well.
I never noticed.
But people should talk about feelings more
In their comment
And less about flows, grammar, spelling, blah.
Thank you for opening my eyes on this one :]