I cant go on

by Blake   Oct 14, 2007


Why did she make me do this?
all I wanted was one last kiss

is that to much to ask for?
and as I lay dying on the floor

all I can see is her face flashing through my mind
and I cant believe that I'm caught up in this bind

and as I lay there I can see her fading away
hoping that she will forgive me one day
for all the trouble I caused that day

I'm so sorry but I cant go on

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Truly a u have writena amazing piece here. full of sadness and regret u have done in the past. i can realte regret things i have done. i really like it.

    TaKe CaRe Always,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wonderful! Brilliant! I Love It!
    Keep Writing!
    5/5

    ~ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Amazing,wonderful,beautiful!!!! well yeah ur a great poet!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awwww, so sad!
    You should capitalize your i's and change 'trew'by 'through' in the third stanza.
    Other than that a very sweet poem by you!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Wow. Details are kinda vague. But it still makes you wonder.... message me the meaning of this please. This poem is quite good though. It leaves the reader intriuged. Hmmm 4/5?

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