Thinking about you

by Blake   Oct 14, 2007


"I don't know why
I keep thinking about you
After what you did to me
Why don't you get out of my
Head and leave me be!

I used to wait -
For you everyday
But now I don't know
What should I say!!!

I trusted you --
With all my heart
And now that you
Took that from me,
I just cant see how -
I'm thinking of you.

How come someone precious,
Can be so heartless?!!!
You were like an angel -
When I first met you
& now it seems like,
The devil has got inside you.

When I think of you
Its like a splinter going -
Straight through my heart
For what youve done to me.

You kept pulling me toward you
Then pushing me away --
I didn't know what to say
So I hope this makes you happy!

And now I shall spend
Eternity in hell --
For what I'm about to do
Because you can not
Control me anymore.

So I guess I'm about
To let this go --
& show that I don't
Love you anymore."

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Amazing job here!! things are never what they seem to be at first. blind by our own eyes. i can relate to this a lot.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Very good...i've felt like this MANY times...very sweet...all your poems have wonderful messages to them...i enjoy reading them....keep it up hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    I enjoy reading ur poems!!!!!!!! ur a great poet and will make an awsome one the more u write! keep up the great writting!!!!! 100/100

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Oh gosh. now i feel like an english teacher... eh. well here I go again.....
    "because you can not control me no more
    so i guess I'm about to go
    to show that i have no more love for you anymore"

    .. dont get offended though. i truly LOVE the poem... i guess im just condescending. my poems arent perfect though. just trying to help.just my opinion but I think the end would make a little more sense this way

    because you can not control me anymore,
    I guess I'm about to let go.
    To show you that I love you no more.

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