My only regret

by Blake   Oct 14, 2007


I don't know what to do anymore
should i spill my blood on the floor?

Should i stay here and wait
Wait for something that may never come?

Or should i go ahead and get it over with?
Because i don't know if i cant take it another minute!

I keep hearing your voice!
Hoping that one day we can rejoice

As i smoke my last cigarette
Not loving you more will be my only regret!

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I liked it. the flow was a bit off but stil it was Great. it also does remind me of things in my pass. it was very nicly writen. you did another Great job here. Keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I loved this It was very good I could feel your emotions great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is cool :)
    it shows emotion and really gets the point across that you are trying to make.
    great work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    The flow was a bit off...but other than that it was good...keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Mimi

    See you're already improving. You did a good job with spacing and rhyming..BTW i like that you recognized that you don't always have to.

    The only thing you could add to make it better wld be to stress the desperation, b/c if the narrator is considering cutting himself or w/e then it wld be some extreme feeling

    good job!

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