Midnight Hours (Sedoka & Tanaka)

There's a huge array of descriptive, lush language here. I found the writing extremely dreamlike, and seamless. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I think you were inspired here.

Your verses came alive for me. I adored the grace, intrigue and the mystique of the storm. There's a playfulness in this piece, a rhythm, and I just loved the idea of a wind goddess and a prince of rain. It really gave this poem spirit, as opposed to just being a nature poem, this felt like so much more. I felt an energy reading this!

So awesome that this was formed as well. This rocked, Meena :)

Such a beautiful piece, the long await for the heat the be driven away by the coming rains, the storms growing on the horizon changing the night sky as it builds. Just a great write Meena

Thank you everyone for the supportive comments..

Meena A vibrant piece - very enjoyable. It gives a real feel for the storm. Milly x