You...

by Gracy Judith   Jun 28, 2020


you come
with sudden rain
raising dead flowers
clawing at sleep
pounding at the window
of silken dreams
you drip like molasses
on a love-hungry soul…
the heart
a mere scratchpad
for reckless scrawling
before you leave

-gracy judith (GJ)

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  • 1 day ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is well written and descriptive good one! Congrats on the win!

  • 2 days ago

    by hiraeth

    Congrats on the win!

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Few lines but everyone of them powerful. It conjures up vivid imagery of a booty call crushed right down to the bones. "You drip like molasses on a love hungry soul" is such wonderfully rich description followed up with the "Love a mere scratchpad for reckless scrawling before you leave" hits the truth like a hammer. A very moving read that paints a vivid and emotional picture. Milly x

    • 6 days ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so very much Milly...I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate your taking the time to read and leave your review. Cheers.

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another wonderful poem, Gracy, rich with metaphors and similes.

    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 1 week ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Glad you liked it Ben! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts on it...appreciated.
      Cheers!

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