you unswivel through the past
as you trip over your imagination,
there's something in this night that’s unsettling
you said when I found you
drowning in pots of paint.
lets watch the seagulls dance
with the ghosts of past,
"But you're color blind " I said.
so you stood up and
splashed them with
As I predicted when you signed as "Star," you are a great talent.
I am never wrong on this. I use to (then when I was watching all the movies released) my chosen actors and movies of the year was matched with the oscars' winners and nominees. My friend mocked me if I were one of the judges.
Here, in this site I was the first one who acknowledged, Adel, Karla, Ben... and so many other for the first time. now all gone with their great poetries.
This, even seemingly the punchline, doesn't work for me. I can't see " kaleidoscope " as mismatching hues. I see it as some kind of spectrum. Your simile, even though genius, reminds me of fashion's mismatching of colours, rather than the ones of the symmetrical rainbows.
Even if a kaleidoscope is a spectrum, it does have mismatching hues, like some colors look good together while others dont, the way it captures light/images/colors, and even then thats a matter of opinion. If we go with how you defined a it as a spectrum capturing light or colors to form one coherent pattern, the same goes with nostalgia it doesnt come out of one thing but with an experience/memories/people/etc and with different layers to it creating that one thing nostalgia.
I'm not arguing or anything I genuinely like it when anyone give their opinion it's so interesting to me. And thank you so much for always reading and acknowledging me as a talent even though I don't feel like I am, Im doing what I love when I can :)