Running out of Days

Excellently penned cindy!

Really well written and very emotional in parts. I think many people will relate to this as we are all on borrowed time in one way or another

5/5

This is one of the most unique, moving poems that I have passed by these days..

the wording was such descriptive and i felt like i was walking beside you.
sharing your feelings..feeling your emotions and being touched by the word choice.

the title took me right away..and oh how i can relate to many..many..many points. Through the weakness in this poem only shows me how BRAVE you are. that you are FACING it.

the hopelessness I felt only showed me the FAITH you have. that you are sharing it.

i am moved, I am touched, and I have added this to my verrryyyy favorite poems.

I love itttt..oh i love you!

5/5
hugs***
we will discuss this piece ^_^

The sadness and hopelessness withi this write really finds a way to the reader's heart and grabs it with pain..a touching write Cindy..take care.

This really touched my emotions

This piece has such a subtle intensity behind it... and the emotion..!! Just amazing.
This piece is so beautiful.. I could not possibly choose a single line or verse in which was a favourite. Sensational!!
5/5