Running out of Days

by Cindy   Dec 14, 2010


Running out of Days

Put on my favorite dress
Legs below strong and bare
Wandering streets of this town
No longer drawing stares

Again see sun shining
Clouds float across blue sky
Birds soar high above
No longer cry to die

Breezes caressing hair
Rain stinging my face
Soft grass tickles bare feet
Dreams of a living place

Running out of days
Locked within hells walls
Clock ticks away hours
Waiting for angels call

Thanks for the help Rob :)

written by: Cynthia Graver
May 16, 2010

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  • 8 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Excellently penned cindy!

    Really well written and very emotional in parts. I think many people will relate to this as we are all on borrowed time in one way or another

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    This is one of the most unique, moving poems that I have passed by these days..

    the wording was such descriptive and i felt like i was walking beside you.
    sharing your feelings..feeling your emotions and being touched by the word choice.

    the title took me right away..and oh how i can relate to many..many..many points. Through the weakness in this poem only shows me how BRAVE you are. that you are FACING it.

    the hopelessness I felt only showed me the FAITH you have. that you are sharing it.

    i am moved, I am touched, and I have added this to my verrryyyy favorite poems.

    I love itttt..oh i love you!

    5/5
    hugs***
    we will discuss this piece ^_^

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The sadness and hopelessness withi this write really finds a way to the reader's heart and grabs it with pain..a touching write Cindy..take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This really touched my emotions

  • This piece has such a subtle intensity behind it... and the emotion..!! Just amazing.
    This piece is so beautiful.. I could not possibly choose a single line or verse in which was a favourite. Sensational!!
    5/5