A Windy Night ( Haiku )

by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald   Jun 2, 2019


Wind howling outside
I pull my bedclothes closer
Driftingt off to sleep

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  • 4 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Thanku very much Michael.... Appreciate your comment! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    Such a nice little Haiku Lee :) M

  • 4 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is a really nice and simple haiku, but it works well because of the imagery and story told. The three lines line up well and the connect with each other. It is a cold night and you pull your covers close to you, to warm up and you are falling asleep. There is nothing I would change here.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice imagery here, I can see the restlessness causes by the storm, then finally sleep comes with the help of comforting bedclothes.
    Just a small typo on 'drifting'

    • 4 years ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Thank you Michael.. :) and oops shall fix that! :D

    • 4 years ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Thank you Jamie!... Your comment means a lot. Glad I am improving and this Haiku has got your approval :D

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